Jim Kacian
the godless month
a late autumn trek to Raven’s Rocks, the trail nearly hidden beneath bronzed leaves, making the forest feel untrammeled weirdly verdant cane of denuded greenbrier, shining as with some private ardor in the midst of decline brilliant air gutted of birds, save for hugger-muggering ravens and crows, annoyed
two rills empty the swales running higher than usual from recent rain away from them, on higher ground, there is only absence of sound, absence of presence in a wood where it’s too easy to be observed, nothing is willing to be found, not even a gnat
at the top of the ridge, looking down from the eponymous rocks, the hollow scattered with boulders from rock slides of centuries past from this aerial view through the emptied trees, three deer can be seen nosing through underbrush, each separate from the others, each sleekly, superbly round against the linearity of simpled woods, scarcely denting the forest with their hooves and beings the barest hint of a deer path each of them follows and at the same time meanders from it some part of me wants to move with them, gracile and sleek, and some other part wants to scare them up, so they become even warier of humans and our capacity for long-range slaughter instead i simply watch from my perch, able to predict their movements even as they are not
mulling it over the legs of the brandy
About the Author
Jim Kacian is founder and president of The Haiku Foundation as well as chairman of its board; founder and owner of Red Moon Press; and editor in chief of Haiku in English: The First Hundred Years (W. W. Norton, 2013).
The haiku took me by surprise; quite the link and shift! Seeing how I’m still trying to figure out how to write a one-line haiku, I appreciate your haiku that much more. I also like the different format in the prose.