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Ray Rasmussen

Chin Down

My daughter’s ashes are now spread in places she loved, although I have a hard time remembering when she loved anything but drugs, and lived anywhere but on the streets.

We did our best, I’ve often thought to myself and even said aloud as we spread her ashes in a mountain meadow. You could have done better, another voice always answers.

“Keep your chin up,” a friend recently said, “You’re not responsible for her choices in life.”

I read that the first printed reference of “keep your chin up” comes from a 1900 edition of a Pennsylvania newspaper. The remainder of the quip is, “Don’t take your troubles to bed with you – hang them on a chair with your trousers or drop them in a glass of water with your teeth.”

teeth full of
caps and fillings
restive nights while
visiting the places
she loved 

About the Author

Ray Rasmussen

Ray Rasmussen resides in Edmonton, Canada. His haibun, haiga, haiku, articles and reviews have appeared in the major print and online haiku genre journals and several anthologies. He presently serves as Encore editor for contemporary haibun online and technical advisor for Drifting Sands Haibun. Ray’s Blog is “All Things Haibun” and his haiku-genres website is “Haiku, Haibun & Haiga.”


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