Jim Kacian
What Remains
first flurry—
all the angles
of the air
Words keep drifting in and piling up, kitterwhack, as though they were the experience itself, instead of being the fine grit left behind when the wet and white and cold have departed, what we scrub away each spring.
About the Author
Jim Kacian is founder and president of The Haiku Foundation as well as chairman of its board; founder and owner of Red Moon Press; and editor in chief of Haiku in English: The First Hundred Years (W. W. Norton, 2013).
That is so, so good, Jim—a perfect gem.
Succinct and vivid. Love it!
Lovely imagery. And so true!
Kitterwhack is a brilliant word – is it your own?
Brilliant! A fresh take on the process of composing poetry.